This is a poem I wrote about my husband cheating can anyone tell me how it is? thanks!?
CHEATING NEVER PAYS
Screw me once shame on me
screw me twice..and you will see
your cheating and lying came as a surprise
but thank you now..you opened my eyes.
You tell me you love me
"I love you you say"
but then comes the best part..
the games that you play.
I’m not as think as you dumb I am
You ruined my life, now I don’t give a damn.
I gave and I gave till I had no more
then I came home and found your whore.
You didn’t expect me home that day
when I walked in what could you say
You tried to stop me from coming inside
I walked right past you, she couldn’t hide.
NOW after forgiveness, with all I could muster
I had a friend, I thought I could trust her.
Only to find out You were you were knockin her too
you were my husband how could you?
I am leaving this all, its time for me to go
I’m going away thats all I know.
You have lied and you cheated you’ve broken my heart
I trusted you wholly, now its time to part.
It wasn’t meant for him..the words just come to me and I write them down..I don’t really care what he thinks..
Philip your an ass..I took care of him HE cheated..obviously you don’t think much of women as your just like him.
The 3rd Section is a play on word…has no one ever heard the saying "I’m not as think as you dumb I am?" google it..its just a play on words and thats what came to my mind so I wrote it how it came. jeez "I’m not as think as you dumb I am" get it?
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Third section first sentence doesn’t make sense. But in all i love this. Pretty much shows that he has lost something great and will never get you back.
You tell me you love me
"I love you you say"
Haha.
Hilarious.
youve had your say
This Ill admit
Now shut up
and end this ***
IDK why you assess the damage,
get off your arse and make me a sammich.
(if I didnt know better, Id say annie is planning a new song :P)
Very good
Not to sound completely insensitive to your situation, but guys REALLY don’t care about reading your feelings put into poetry.
Very sweet
Maybe if you didn’t write stupid poems all of the time and took care of him, you wouldn’t be in this spot.
I’m glad something makes you feel better, but what happened to a good old fashion revenge plan?
it is nice.shows your emotions completely
Well, the situation described is sad but the poem is fairly decently written. Hope it helped to write it.
I’m a little gayer for having read that, thanks a lot now I need to go drink a shot at work to set things right.
poetry about cheating partners just doesn’t cut it for me. it will work better with prose, more powerful.
its ok
I think it’s corny. Not to put your feelings in poetry form, but- yeah, ok the poetic form is wack. You’d be better off saying all of that outright. How do you expect someone to understand that you’re in pain, when you’ve taken the time to ensure your words rhyme? No..
If it helps you cope and get your feelings out, it’s great.
What an idiot to bring his mistress home, and have an affair with your own friend.
Good for you for walking away. I hope you find someone who will treat you right!
I trusted you wholly, now its time to part.
Nice…
Third section and first sentence doesnt make any sense. The correct way is I’m not as dumb as you think im.lol. wow, that was a great poem.lmao.
A few minor spelling errors, but overall it’s a good poem. Many women will appreciate it. I hope it helped you, usually writing your feelings down help in some way. Good for you.
Sounds really good! A little touching up maybe…but really good otherwise
From your heart,to the point.I like it!!!